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by Andy Maslen
In business-to-consumer mailings, everyone uses offers. I'm sure you're
familiar with the kind of thing I'm talking about: get a free calendar,
save £10, win a holiday.
But in business-to-business, some marketeers are a little wary. "Our customers
are too sophisticated; they'll see what we're trying to do" is a common
reason given for not running an offer.
Well, it's true that businesspeople are clever and complex creatures,
but they also love an offer. After all, businesspeople are consumers,
too, and they respond to offers addressed to them at home, don't they?
So if you're not already using offers to lift response on your mailings,
now would be an excellent time to start testing. Here are a few things
to remember about using offers:
Six tips for successful offers
- Always limit your offer. Either by time, which is
probably the most common way, or by quantity. You could say, "Reply
by 31st October 2001 and you'll save 10%." Or "Remember, you must reply
by 31st October 2001 to claim your free pen." For quantity closes, you
could try "The first 100 people to reply will each get a free clock."
Or "Reply today: if you're one of the lucky 50, you'll be spending a
day driving a Formula 1 racing car."
- Make the offer fit the action required. Offering
a gift worth £100 for a buying decision valued at £50 looks odd. Your
respondent is likely to think "What's the catch?"
- If you're offering a saving on the full price, try
and express it as both a percentage saving and a cash amount: different
things appeal to different people.
- Always repeat your offer. In a mailpack you've got
the outer, the letter and the brochure and you may also have a reply
envelope. These are all opportunities to reinforce the message that
they could get FREE STUFF for replying. But couch the offer in varying
language so you don't simply repeat yourself.
- Consider putting your offer in your main headline.
Lots of very successful subscription promotions lead on the offer, for
example, a headline might say "Get £100 of copywriting vouchers when
you subscribe to Sunfish Monthly".
- Test your offers. Do people respond better to the
offer of free stuff when they order at full price, or do they like the
idea of a discount?
Whatever you decide to do, just bear in mind that businesspeople are just
the same as consumers (which is what they are half the time, after all).
Everyone likes getting a good deal and everyone wants something for nothing.
And they really work!
One of the best offers I ever ran was a pocket calculator that we bought
in for £3.00 as an incentive on a £550 reference book. We had librarians
falling over themselves to place their orders and saw a big uplift in response.
For a calculator! These people must have owned at least two calculators
each already. But it was free. (And let's remember that 'free' is one of
the best words any copywriter has at his or her fingertips.)
(c) Copyright Andy Maslen 2001.
I hope you find these ideas useful for your next campaign. If you want some
help with the copy -- for ads, letters, brochures, websites or whatever
-- please email andy.maslen@sunfish.co.uk
or call 020 8996 0416.
About Andy Maslen
Andy Maslen specialises in business-to-business copywriting. He writes marketing
materials, corporate brochures, websites and media information. Clients
include publishers, professional services firms and marketing companies.
For information on Management Centre Europe's Marketing & Sales portfolio
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